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These are reflections on my own writing process. I hope some of them may be useful to others but I am not attempting to create rules for all writers.
It is two years today since I began writing these daily reflections. I am now editing them into book form. It has a working title of How To Write And More Importantly How To Be A Writer. It will be published at amazon in the near future.
Writing is what writers do. There does not have to be a reason, reward or response. Writers will write anyway.
I don’t begin writing from an idea about plot or character. I begin with a feeling, like sitting on a beach watching the waves, or a coloured scarf taken from a box of treasured possessions. The characters and the plot grow from there. As I write I gather from memory or imagination to create characters and develop plot.
Writing is not about being noticed anymore than key cutting. There are millions of keys cut and they open millions of doors. There are millions of books written and millions of people read them.
When you begin writing a story it is sobering to realise that the twenty six letters of the alphabet have already been arranged into countless words filling over one hundred and thirty million books and you are about to add to the number, hoping it will be noticed.
Writer’s block is treading water in a sea of words.
The ability of words to create images in the mind of the reader should never cease to amaze the writer.
Writers are alchemists. When words connect with readers the true magic of writing begins.
Writers are people who are fascinated by words. Words and life.
Plot and time rarely have a straightforward relationship. A simple linear narrative is too transparent for most readers.
A palimpsest is a powerful narrative tool because there is never just one point of view in a story. As in life, there are different perspectives that inform each other.
A first person point of view character is a fish eye lens through which the reader views an imagined world.
Learning to write is like learning to swim. The mechanical strokes give way to buoyancy and fluid movement through the water.
The risk writers take when they publish their work is that they will be misinterpreted. Sometimes an even greater risk is that they will be understood.
Writers are sometimes victims of their own imaginations. When a story demands to be written a writer has no choice. He must sit down every day and write until it is done.
Stories are not developed word by word. They emerge as images and ideas fully or partly formed by the subconscious. Writing only flourishes when the subconscious is engaged.
All writing is fiction. Reality is what happens. Words follow with a reality of their own.
A novel is a window to a world the writer has visited in his mind.
Writers are investors in humanity. Their currency is the human condition.
Whether it be an image or an idea, the source of inspiration must be translated into words that allow the reader to visualize what the writer saw or felt or imagined. It is a kind of semaphore that relies heavily on the intelligence and receptivity of the reader.
A story is an imagined life embedded in reality. Without reality a story has no meaning.
A narrative can be as short as one sentence. In its simplest form, a story is the movement of an idea through change.
Rewriting is the art of removing foliage that does not enhance the flower.
Writing in the first person point of view is a little like writing in another language. The nuances and phrasing don’t come naturally because they are going through the mind and personality of the character.
Writing is just reading a story as it is written.
Stories make more sense than life because stories have endings.
Writers go where they themselves fear to tread.
Words communicate, amuse, entertain, heal, defend, arouse, justify, explore, redeem, re-create and re-invent. Possibly more. Who wouldn’t want to be a writer?
A story is an event in words.
Writing is a commitment of ideas.
When you can write what has never been imagined before you are creating a new world.
Books don’t change the world but they influence the people who do.
Writing is an occupation with a built in debriefing function. Nothing is quite as bad after you have written about it. Writing also makes the good stuff even better.
The writer in the room is the one who looks carefully at you when you are speaking, who seems to consider the words and appears to be slowly digesting everything he sees.
A writer is interested in how his ideas will fit other lives.
Writing is an exploration of subconscious ideas using the sonar of language.
A writer who doesn’t write could very well have a brain burst from excess words.
What makes a person a writer is the compulsion to translate experience into words.
A book cover is a window.
A Writer is a pedestrian on a busy street.
Writing that scares the writer excites the reader.
Writing connects your mind to other realities. Reading does the same from a different direction.
Writing for yourself, writing what you want to write is freedom. Writing for any other reason is just like any other job – you do it to please others. I suspect the best writing has been done to please the writer and no one else.
What I write is what I write. What I edit is up to me … and others.
Good writing surprises even the writer.
The best writing does not flow from mundane consciousness. It draws directly from the ether of inspiration where all art originates. Writers like artists derive their magic from somewhere beyond the mind.
Writing well is the first challenge for a writer but success goes beyond that. Successful writing has to tap into something vital, something that engages the reader more than clever words.
Writers have days off when they just think about writing.
A scriptwriter must hear dialogue as he writes.
Writing style is the movement of words around meaning.
Writing is a footnote to experience. It explains the why, the what if, the whatever. It expands on what happened, what might have happened and what could happen.
When a writer is not writing he is thinking about writing. Sometimes words need to pause in the ether of the imagination before they are ready to be committed to a manuscript.
Technology is a tool that becomes part of your creative process. My handwriting style deteriorated when I began writing with a keyboard because I learned to think faster and now a biro can’t keep up with my thoughts.
If you didn’t want your personal characteristics embedded in an archetypal evil character you should have behaved better with the writer.
Writing beyond your comfort zone is scary, dangerous and rewarding but the real fear, risk and reward are in publishing it.
The best writing is akin to photography and painting. It shows, rather than describes. It allows the audience to make its own judgements. The writer presents an idea then steps back and lets the reader decide what to make of it.
Writing is a combination of imagination and technique. If it is dominated by technique it lacks life and is boring. If it is dominated by imagination it is undisciplined and confusing. Good writers combine the two elements in ways that both enable and challenge the reader.
Time is the warp and weft of a novel. Years, weeks, days, hours and minutes are the fabric on which events are stretched or shrunk to create the texture of the story.
Whatever is happening now must be processed before it is available to the writer. A writer is not a journalist who documents events. He is an interpreter who translates them.
The deeper a story is hidden in the Writer’s psyche the longer it takes to write.
Never underestimate the influence of the full moon on your writing. It is not just werewolves who draw power from the lunar cycle.
Sometimes a writer has to return to old ideas to discover himself.
An unfinished novel is the doorway to a garden that was never fully explored. At the end of the path there may be another treasure.
Returning to rewrite a first draft is like moving into a hastily built house that needs renovating.
Imperfect writing from the heart is more engaging than perfect writing from the mind.
Writing styles may change but the ability of words to connect with the human psyche does not. Shakespeare’s language is hundreds of years out of date but his words still go straight to the heart of the human condition.
Writing maturity comes when you stop trying to please readers and markets and write to honour your stories.
Writing without publishing is like singing in the shower.
A writer is an alchemist transforming ideas into words and words into stories.
Writers never rest. They are continually translating life into story.
Writers are terrorists. They attack ideas with words.
When you talk to a writer, be careful what you say. It may be taken down and used as evidence for a character.
A writer with ideas is armed and dangerous. Don’t leave him alone. He will rewrite the history of the world.
A reader follows the journey of a writer without the detours and dead ends.
If a writer writes a novel and nobody reads it, is it a novel?
A Writer has to let go of a novel the way a parent lets go of an adult child. Having done the best you can, you have to have faith that your efforts have not been in vain.
The point of publication is fraught with doubt. You have worked so hard to polish a manuscript. You don’t seem to be able to do anything to improve it. But there is a lingering suspicion as you commit to releasing it that perhaps in the judgement of others it will not be quite as perfect as you imagine.
Good fiction is underpinned by the writer’s understanding of real events and real people. A writer has to be careful not to begin writing about an experience in his head before it is over. He also has to be careful to get to know a person well before making them into a character. Fiction is more than the original observation. The experience and the character are the foundation and must be understood before they can be transformed into something new.
A playwright has to trust a director to move the actors in ways that are compatible with the dialogue and motivation of the characters.
Writing for theatre requires writing in real time. A playwright must be aware of every minute in a story and understand the importance of timing.
I sometimes wonder how long it will be before I can read one of my own novels as if someone else wrote it. Even years after I write something I find myself proofing as I read it.
Punctuation is the musical score of a story. It should be used sparingly to guide the reader into the rhythms of the prose.
The imagination is full of invisible threads. The writer finds them and makes them visible.
Writing humour is the art of concocting little surprises to ambush the reader from behind ordinary words.
Writing is just words, until somebody reads it.
Writing isn’t work. It is rewriting that is work. Hard work. Don’t become a writer unless you like hard work. The first draft is easy because you are inspired. Making it publishable is a long, difficult process that has to go on long after the inspiration is just a memory.
A writer journeys through words to destinations of the mind.
A reader follows the writer’s journey with the same footsteps though different eyes.
A story is nothing more than a window to this world or another.
Stories give shape to the formless chaos of life. That is where religion finds its influence. Religion is just a story that provides meaning.
A story is what life tells itself when we are listening.
Stories divide the random universe into portions that can be digested by the mind.
Writing is a challenge to convey the beauties, tragedies and complexities, of life in a way that enables the reader to appreciate things not personally encountered, or experienced.
A writer does not mind being alone because he always has words for companions.
Writing is about the ability to reconnect page after page, chapter after chapter. Writing a few lines each day is better than weeks of vacation writing left on the backburner.
Writing is a journey between experience and understanding.
Writing is remembering things that never happened.
To a writer, reality is not inviolate. It can be imagined and re-imagined.
Writing doesn’t turn a fantasy into reality but it does create something that is real.
When the world doesn’t seem fair, keep writing.
When the world makes no sense, just keep writing.
Writers bring the past to the future.
As a scriptwriter, I create dialogue as the framework around which action can be constructed.
Theatre is the novel of the public place.
Drama is the thinnest knife-edge in writing. The words of a playwright are exposed to the dramaturg, the director, the actor, the audience and the critic.
A writer is one who receives and gives the gift of story.
Writing is both craft and art. Passionate expression requires disciplined editing.
Writing is a commitment to words. A writer is judged by the words he writes and the ideas they represent. They should be well crafted if he does not want to be misunderstood.
Writers don’t create in a vacuum. Good writing comes from being engaged with life, people, ideas and issues. Even a story set on Mars in 2905 is about the present human condition.
Life is sometimes a distraction for a writer. He has too many other lives to think about. Characters can be more demanding than real people.
A writer can have many voices. Every genre requires a different voice. Every forum requires another.
Vindication: when a reader or a reviewer describes your novel precisely the way you would describe it.
A writer will be meddling with words long after the conversation has ended. He will be playing with nuances and adjusting the subtle shades of meaning when everyone else is sleeping, content with what was said.
Writing has many rules. If they work for you, make them yours. If they don’t work for you, ignore them. You can make up your own.
You find storytellers at the dinner table, on buses and trains, in staff rooms and supermarkets, at bus stops and in queues, on stage, radio and television. Some of them write their stories down.
Every day is full of new possibilities and that’s where stories begin.
You can eat cake when you are writing fiction and not get fat.
You can commit crimes while you are writing fiction and not get caught.
Like a drop of ink in a pool of still water, an idea can arise from a random thought and grow into a story. Writers take notice of random thoughts.
A writer feels naked without pen and paper.
When your emotions come dressed in words and words are dripping from everything you see, you are a writer. You have to write or the words will begin to overflow from your mind.
Write first, ask draft questions later.
The writer’s first task is to seduce the reader into suspending disbelief then he has to convince the reader to believe in what is written.
Elements of real people enable the writer to see characters as real and therefore to make their actions believable. Even if real people are recognisable in characters that doesn’t mean they are the characters. In good fiction characters have a life of their own. They are in the story to serve the purposes of the writer and the plot.
A story can position a reader to accept the untenable by establishing moral motivation in the characters. Steinbeck does this in Mice and Men. He makes shooting Lennie the most humane option for George. Religious Americans in the Thirties of course didn’t agree.
Ideas are icebergs. The writer examines the tip and gradually uncovers what lies beneath.
Dylan Thomas described writing as a ‘craft or sullen art exercised in the still night’. For me the early morning or dead of night when normal people are asleep seems to be conducive to inspiration. Is it because there is less mental static in the ether? Less chance of being distracted? Now of course it is only available if you can resist the Internet, a twenty-four hour global distraction that embraces all time zones and where there are always a lot of other people awake.
The first draft is a block of marble into which subsequent drafts are finely chiselled.
Sometimes it is difficult to make life inside your stories as unpredictable and baffling as life itself. Life doesn’t always make as much sense as a story.
Writers are primarily observers. You have to observe human nature to be able to create characters. You have to observe the world to create setting. You have to listen to conversation to create dialogue.
Story is the search for meaning that grows out of the narrative of people’s lives.
The most important function of story is to restore meaning where it has been lost or forgotten, or provide meaning when it has never been found.
When the future is uncertain it must be imagined in stories.
When the past is forgotten it must be reinvented in stories.
It is the responsibility of every generation to listen to the stories of the previous generation and ensure they are recorded.
Every account of an event or reflection on an experience is a story. From the five year old telling his mother what happened at school to the grandmother telling her grandchildren how she used to walk five miles just to get to school, we all trade stories. We are all storytellers. Writers are people who want to preserve the stories and share them to a wider audience.
The basic element of a story is the word. A journey is made of single steps. A story is made of single words.
In the beginning is the word and the word creates image. And the image is an idea. And the idea is story. There is a bit of God in every writer.
Narrative voice is the attitude of the writer. In first person point of view it takes the form of character and the character’s self-revelation. In third person point of view it is a more subtle concatenation of adjectives, syntax and tone suggesting the writer’s stance.
Characters are like people. They don’t come into being fully formed. They are born in an idea and grow through the nurture of the writer to become fully realised personalities with a destiny that unfolds in the story.
To me style and genre in writing are simply moods. Some days I feel like writing gothic, others dystopian, post-modern, fantasy, satire, for children, for young adults, for paranoid megalomaniacs. On another day I might simply write an email to a friend or post something trivial on twitter.
A good playwright suggests action through dialogue and a minimum of stage directions. Shakespeare used almost no stage directions. Directors and actors are able to work out the action and expression of characters from the dialogue. Good prose should allow the reader to create the drama of a story in their own imagination.
A writer who wants to improve the quality of his dialogue should study good playwrights. Playwrights use dialogue for almost every aspect of storytelling.
Theatre is an opportunity for a writer to tell multiple stories without contrivance. Every character in a script can speak for himself. Every character has a story to tell.
Walk through any art gallery and you will see how varied the creative process can be. The creation of art work is an expression of the artist’s mind and personality. Painting can vary from meticulously mixed and carefully applied nuances of watercolour, to buckets of house paint thrown from a distance. The writing process is less obvious but just as varied. Stories can grow from a series of detailed notes and observations or they can flow spontaneously from the subconscious. The developing writer has to discover by trial and error the methodology most compatible with his imagination. That is why there are so many rules to writing but why most of them don’t necessarily apply.
A good exposition should contain a succinct backstory that the reader barely notices. It should provide all the essential information required to make the plot mechanisms logical and believable.
Characters must have a past and a future. The writer must visualise their existence beyond the story in order to make them psychologically complete.
A writer should approach language with respect, like a craftsman with glass, or timber or clay. Language is capable of expressing the highest and finest of ideas. It is used and abused every day but really it should be handled with care.
Punctuation is less noticeable in modern fiction than it is in the classics because there is generally less of it. Modern readers understand the nuances of prose and need less guidance in how to interpret syntax.
How many times do you have to read a final draft to be sure a story is finished? Try putting a story away for a couple of years. If you still think it is finished then maybe it is.
A day spent wandering somewhere interesting – observing, making notes, sketching, photographing – is money in the bank for a writer.
Storytelling is the art of finding meaning in life, giving structure to random events and attaching significance to human behaviour.
Life has infinite possibilities. Many of them will never be developed so Life tells stories about itself through the minds of writers.
Readers discover meaning from stories, which begin as mere possibilities in the minds of writers.
Writing is the forensic investigation of the meaning of life. Writers find clues that others overlook. They construct elaborate hypotheses of human behaviour. Those hypotheses are called stories.
Always be suspicious of a story that unfolds as if it is writing itself. It probably needs a lot of editing. Or else you have subconsciously stolen it from somewhere.
A writer without pen and paper is often vague because he is trying to remember a succession of ideas until he has a chance to write them down.
If there isn’t a pen and notebook in his pocket he is not a writer. A writer would not want to risk wasting the ideas and observations that constantly trickle through his mind.
Once a story is begun it requires a kind commitment, for better or for worse. A novel may not show its worth for fifty thousand words. You just have to keep writing and hope you have made the right decisions.
A story based on a real event is not a recount. It is a journey through the undisciplined, unfocussed, unravelling of reality to find the elements of story.
A collection of short stories is a series of windows. A novel is a doorway.
Punctuation is not a set of rules. It is a code system that the writer uses to help the reader understand his syntax. The most important outcome of punctuation is the reader understanding how it sounds and what it means.
Reviews and Covers are the key to success in e-publishing. There are so many books being published, readers have to be given a reason to try something new.
The structure of a novel should be finalised by the penultimate draft. The final draft is about presentation – dust and polish and just a little rearranging on shelves. Occasionally you see something that needs to be moved to another room.
The remainder bins of book departments in chain stores are graveyards that scare me more than haunted cemeteries in the dead of night.
When a reader describes your novel in a way that mirrors your intention you feel a profound sense of vindication. You write to have an effect on readers but until they give you feedback you have no idea how well you have succeeded.
The biggest decision to make with post-apocalyptic writing is where technological progress ends or significantly diminishes. The imagined world must be constructed from that point.
When a character says or does something you don’t approve then it is safe to assume you have given your creation a life of its own and it will now have an interesting story. A character is not a mouthpiece of the writer; it represents itself.
The best writers revenge is not making people into characters and killing them but subtly portraying their shortcomings in marginal characters who have no real importance in the story.
A writer should grab ideas deftly and handle them with care. There is something about the first moment of inspiration that carries the essence of a story. If it eventually becomes a novel it should carry traces of that first idea.
A writer without a pen is like a butterfly collector without a net.
Some stories step out of people’s lives and rearrange themselves to be more interesting than the original. A story has an advantage over real life because life does not always have good plot structure. A story can be rewritten until the pace and the timing are right.
People are walking stories. They are continually acting out stories about themselves and revealing their past. For a writer, stories arise naturally from observing people.
Politics documents what readers are likely to care about. Politicians articulate the issues that motivate people and express the emotions that they inspire. A writer does not have to admire politicians to learn from them.
Writers should study politics. Political life is a magnified microcosm of society. The passions, intrigues and dramas are the stuff of human existence. More than sport, politics is the gladiatorial arena of the modern day. Politicians battle for the hearts and minds of the people and their weapons are the things we hold dear.
Language is a tool for communicating with an audience. Story is a device for developing communication and engaging the audience.
The plot can wait if the words fascinate. Reading is time out from the stress of everyday life. Why hurry your reader with incessant pace?
Modern editors favour writing that moves the story forward with every line. They need to realise there are a lot of readers who still like a writer to digress into reflection and backstory simply because it is interesting. The plot can wait if the words continue to engage the reader.
Writing stories set in the future is less about imagining what might be than understanding what is and how it will evolve. Good science fiction is about human nature, which doesn’t change as much as technology.
The mind of a writer is never at rest. When it is not collecting ideas from observation and experience it is listening to the subconscious for ways to use what has been observed and collected.
A writer can afford the luxury of being non judgemental because he is interested in human behaviour. Like an artist he is able to see vexatious people as subjects who provide him with the raw material for his art rather than being a source of irritation.
The task of a review writer is to improve the understanding of both the reader and the writer. It is really a teaching role and should only be done by those with a deep understanding of writing and genre. The function of selling or sinking books is secondary and is an off spin to the commercial interests in writing.
When writing a review I try to be objective and describe the book the way I think the writer sees it. Whether I like it or not, I focus on its genre attributes and what the writer has tried to do. If someone has gone to the trouble of publishing it the chances are it won’t be so bad I want to discourage anyone from reading it. In some ways a review is for the author. It should encourage and reinforce what the author has attempted to do. A good review leads a writer to write something better because it helps them see more clearly what they are trying to achieve. A review doesn’t have to tell the potential reader whether or not they will like the book, just what it is they can expect to read. What they discover by purchasing the book is what reading is all about.
When writing of desire the adjectives must be controlled. Restraint is the mode of expression. Everyone has experienced desire and from common experience we get clichés. A writer must find the understatement that fully expresses the desire without the clichés.
I sometimes wonder what I would do if I was locked up and deprived of the means to write down the words that pour into my head each day. Scratching with my fingernails on the walls would not suffice.
Script writing is for writers who like the bare bones of their writing to be displayed in public with every phrase and nuance open to scrutiny. An opening night performance is like having hundreds of editors reading your new manuscript at the same time.
In a blurb, a writer needs all his powers of description to describe his novel, encapsulating the story and the genre in a way that will convey succinctly to the reader the simple fact that they must read it.
People tell stories all the time, their own and other’s. Only writers bother to write them down.
What can I write about that hasn’t been written about before? If I worried about that I would never write anything.
A writer respects words. He takes the trouble to spell them correctly, arrange them in syntax and punctuate them so they sing a song to the reader.
There are some days when a writer writes nothing. Experience and thought continue to percolate together in his mind and as soon as he sits with a pen or a word processor the words will flow.
There are some days when a writer is not trying to write a bestseller. He is just working on his craft and enjoying his relationship with words.
The millions of books published since the Gutenberg Press was invented will no doubt be exceeded by epublishing. Makes it hard for a writer to feel his work is special. When I look at the piles of books on remainder tables in bookshops and don’t recognize a single author or title I realise that just getting published amounts to very little.
Redrafting a novel is like wandering in an unkempt garden, trimming, pruning, uprooting and replanting. A gardener understands the need for destruction as part of the creative process.
Writing a novel is a journey in instalments. You leave home for hours at a time to wander with your characters in a world of your imagining.
Writers haunt the alleyways of the imagination, looking in dustbins and lit windows, scaring stray cats and disturbing late night drunks from their slumbers.
Reading a story you wrote a long time ago is like meeting on old friend and measuring the distance you have travelled since you were together. You realise your story has changed and you are travelling a different road but you appreciate what has been.
The Inner Writer is always working. When you are very still and quiet he will give you your next idea and tell you where to begin.
I sometimes wonder where novels come from. They are not just words. They seem to have an entity of their own, as if they were meant to be written. So how come they are so much work for the writer?
A prolific writer is a disciplined person who has made good use of a talent for words.
The best book titles are metaphors for the novel’s theme. The best book covers are open doorways into the story.
A writer is someone who keeps writing.
Style is the writer’s voice. It is the way the writer speaks, the tone of his voice. Some writers have more than one voice, more than one style. They write in more than one genre. The writer’s voice can change according to the audience. You don’t speak the same way to a Pastor at a dinner party as you do to a football team at three quarter time. Different stories require different telling.
A fully realised character should at some point dictate to the writer. The best characters own their stories. They surprise the writer by making choices that impact on the plot. Their destiny unfolds from who they are rather than what the writer imagines for them.
It’s quite an amazing feeling when you finally decide a novel is ready to be published and you make the decision to put it out there. You have done your best and it is now in the lap of the gods.
Writing has many rules, some of which are entirely contradictory. Rules are for those who need them. As in life, some follow the rules and others just follow their instincts. The rules are written by the latter.
There is story potential in every event, every idea. A writer observes people and events, searching for the ideas that lead to stories. Most have no substance or relevance. Some develop validity in the telling. Others are stories simply waiting to be told.
Like many writers my first novel was thinly veiled autobiography and not good enough to be published. I seem to remember a publisher saying it was evocative writing but it did not have enough conflict to hold a reader’s interest. There was obviously not enough conflict in my life. That’s why I began writing fiction. It is only the few who have lives interesting enough to make good stories. But who would swap places with someone like Gregory David Roberts just so they can write about reaching rock bottom and surviving?
When you are talking to a writer, be aware he may be taking notes. Don’t imagine you are going to appear as yourself in any of his stories but he may dissect you and use the most interesting aspects of your personality to create characters that are in some small way connected to you and the impression you made on him.
When I am not actually writing I am recording words in my memory to describe what I see, hear and feel. I am also selecting aspects of reality, blending them with imaginings and shaping them to narrative ideas. If I have been unable to sit down and write for any length of time, as soon as I get to a computer or pen and paper I hit the ground running.
There are three things that nurture a writer: reading, writing and experience.
Writing a novel is like putting a message in a bottle and hoping thousands of beachcombers find it on hundreds of shores.
Writing is the hieroglyphics of the imagination.
When all else fails you can still write.
If you would rather write an undiscovered masterpiece than a best seller you are definitely a writer.
I need a badge or a tee shirt that tells people the reason I am talking to myself is because I am a writer inventing dialogue for my characters.
Narrative is a faculty of the imagination rather than simply an element of literature, drama or music. We each tell a story with own life. The creative spirit finds expression in our choices and responses and the way we shape the events that mark the passing of our days.
Writers are creatures of the night, of lonely places, of silences and the forgotten echoes of human emotion. Listen to writers. They reflect the nuances of your soul.
Language conventions and literary techniques are tools that must become invisible to the writer’s mind. They are best used instinctively to express the writer’s narrative purpose.
Writing a novel is not a great achievement. The first draft comes straight from the imagination, which is a kind of conduit to the universal consciousness. Great literary achievement results from working on a novel and shaping it until it is flawless.
Ideas do not make a writer. Everyone has ideas. Writing does not make a writer. Many people write. It is rewriting that makes a writer.
A character begins life as a description. The reader suspends disbelief and creates a three dimensional person from the words of the writer.
Writing is an engagement with the mystery of human behaviour.
Writing can’t be taught. There are so many styles and genres, many of which defy each other’s rules of engagement. A writer must develop from within, from a love of reading and a desire to write. The form will be determined by the passions of the writer, and informed by the discipline of his chosen genre.
Why do I write? As Gertrude Stein didn’t say: I write because I write because I write.
A first draft is like an adolescent full of promise. It needs the discipline of an adult writer to fulfil its potential.
Some stories seem to come almost pre-written as if from the ether but even those stories need polishing drafts.
The cover of a novel is a picture that is worth more than just a thousand words. It has to suggest the most appealing aspect of a long and complex story and attract the type of reader most likely to want to read it.
In some old cultures Medicine Men chanted to induce visions. Sometimes writing is like that. You keep writing and whole landscapes and stories appear in your mind. Calling it imagination trivialises it. Really it is a shamanic experience.
I write to remember, I write to forget, I write to engage, I write to escape, I write to live, I will write until I die.
Writing is a tangible link between the past, the present and the future. A remembered experience can be blended with current reality and transformed into something that is yet to happen.
Characters should never get what they want without loss. A writer must be quite Machiavellian with characters, make them suffer. They should arrive at their destination minus a leg or a loved one. The Hero journey was not meant to be easy. Characters should reflect the fact that in life we all get scarred, even if it is only inside.
Writing is a place where a writer goes to create new places.
Advice For A Young Writer
Choose a time of the day when you know you will not be interrupted for one hour. Turn off your phone and all social media. Sit down and write whatever you can. If you don’t have something you want to write about just describe places, people and events in your life until you are able to invent something. Do this seven days a week without fail. Don’t judge how much you write as long as you spend the full hour at your desk. You will soon find that ideas will emerge and your hour will become more productive.
Sometimes words flow, sometimes they drip. The writing process is one of constant adjustment to the supply of words. I have stared at single sentences for hours and I have written thousands of words in a single hour. I still don’t know where words come from. I am just grateful when they do.
When you meet someone and you suddenly begin describing them in your head you know they will be the basis of an interesting character. You have to be careful not to learn too much about them so their life does not take over your story.
Don’t worry about the truth. Keep writing. If you are writing from your heart the truth will emerge.
Writers are people who not only make sense of experience through words but actually understand it in words.
Sometimes the writer is not the best person to decide when a final draft is complete. Second and third opinions add perspective.
With each draft a writer develops a more intimate relationship with his story until finally he is calibrating subtle nuances that hinge on choices between words that to the observer might seem almost identical.
I write for the reader most like myself. I want poetry and mystery and humour. I expect to have to work for my understanding. I don’t want to be spoon-fed like pulp fiction readers.
Finishing a first draft is like finishing work on Wednesday. It’s hump day, not Friday.
Dialogue is character in action. It is not a mechanism for backstory or information. Characters should speak to each other, not the reader.
The description of setting should enhance the action rather than distract the reader’s attention. Setting is only important as a context for action. A novel is not a travelogue; it is a story.
Character description in a novel should be sketched rather than painted in detail. It should suggest images without impeding the flow of the story. The history of a character is for the writer, not the reader. It should be deleted with the backstory. Full characterisation emerges through the behaviour of the character in the story proper.
Classic fiction often stands the test of time better than expository text because it deals with the universal as much as the specific. Shakespeare is more relevant today than any political or social Elizabethan treatise. Dickens is more relevant than any Victorian essay.
A story begins with a character and a question. Will the character succeed or fail? In the answer to the question the reader finds out who the character is.
To begin writing a novel is to hear the sounds of distant music and to believe they are the first notes of a symphony.
Stories must surprise in some way. The reader is bored by anything that is too familiar, for example the memoir of an unremarkable life, or a clichéd murder plot. The writer has to add or combine the elements of story in unexpected ways.
Stories don’t happen. They must be told. Even stories based closely on actual people and events must be stitched together with the conventions of storytelling to make them of interest to the reader. Stories are essentially rhetoric. The interest is in the way they are told.
Literature’s best characters are so well constructed they can be duplicated to perform beyond their stories. Peter Carey took the characters of Dickens and wrote Jack Maggs. Directors take characters from novels and bring them to life in films. Good characters are as substantial as real people. Perhaps more so.
Everything a character does in a story must be congruent with its psychology and physiology. Believable characters must be true to themselves rather than subservient to the plot.
Developing a character is the art of imagining a complete psychology and complementing it with a physiology. This can be done intuitively or by constructing from an imagined history.
Writing never occurs in a vacuum. Writers choose the stimuli to which they respond. People suggest characters, landscapes suggest settings, emotions suggest conflict, events suggest plots. Imagination makes stories of them all.
The key to writing is the dissonance between experience and understanding. Fully realised beings don’t write. Only the unenlightened need to write. When I am a Buddha I don’t expect to be writing at all.
Writers need to take time out to smell the flowers without describing their fragrance.
The sense of achievement in getting to the end of a manuscript is tempered by the fact that the first draft is only the half way mark.
If you have forgotten something, ask a writer. He probably has it jotted down somewhere.
When you do not have a pen or a computer and you begin trying to memorise your thoughts, you know you are a writer.
Coming to the end of a story as writer is similar to coming to the end of a story as a reader. You feel a little sad that it is over. For the writer it’s worse because what lies ahead is the grind of rewriting and editing and getting it published.
A sophisticated reader thinks like a writer. The writer must be devious to stay one step ahead of him so he doesn’t become bored by the predictability of the characters and the plot.
Characters should struggle to know themselves. The reader must see the flaws in a character, before the character is enlightened or redeemed. It is the character’s need for self-discovery that makes him multi-dimensional and interesting.
Sometimes ideas arrive at inopportune moments. If you see me wandering off from the party, or pulling over to the side of the road to scribble something down you know why. Sometimes the most important part of a story comes when I am busy doing something else. Last night the climax scene of my current play came to me while I was driving on the freeway.
A writer should never worry about where ideas come from. Just be thankful. The Muse is sacred and not to be disturbed.
Shut up and write.
A script is a sketch from which a director creates a painting. If the outline is not accurate the performance will lack integrity.
A script is not a story to be read. It is a blueprint for the creation of a three dimensional drama. The dialogue is crucial. It enables the actor to find the voice of the character and bring it to life.
Drama that does not arise from conflictual relationships between characters is mere histrionics. Characters must give each other reasons to show emotion. Like actors they must act and react to create drama.
Characters are like actors. They are not on stage to look pretty. They are there to have conflict with other characters.
The final draft of a story is the most important. The longer you wait the more likely you can read it objectively, the more likely you can read as if it is somebody else’s story. Then you can judge just how effective it is and what adjustments need to be made.
Even stories that write themselves – the ones that just flow out of your head – need the nip and tuck of a rewrite. Readers don’t want little gaps and blind spots or clumsy transitions in a narrative. They want something that is perfectly finished, like a picture.
The final drafting of a story is like spitting and polishing a car, getting all the little blemishes off so it can drive out, gleaming in the sunshine.
How long is a piece of string? A story determines its own length with its pace and rhythm and the balance of its narrative. It takes a certain number of words to tell a particular story without gaps and without verbosity. A writer in tune with the narrative will instinctively find the optimum length.
One day I might join Writer’s Anonymous. I will have to lock myself in a Buddhist monastery without any access to pen, paper, or word processor. I will either end up scratching words on the walls with my fingernails or achieve enlightenment and enter the wordless state of Nirvana. Meanwhile I will just live in the world of illusion and continue to write every day because it is my karma and my addiction.
Please excuse the writer who indulges in rhetoric. Language is his plaything and he delights in exploring the nuances of its many and varied forms.
Some stories arrive in my mind with an ending. All I have to do is create a logical set of steps to get there. Others arrive with only a beginning. That’s when writing becomes a journey of discovery. Until I find the ending, I don’t know if is going to be worthwhile.
Writing novels is not for the faint hearted. Words often come easily but to make something of them that will stand with so many thousands of brilliant novels in bookshops and libraries is a daunting task.
Designing a murder mystery plot is like stitching a patchwork quilt. Every piece must fit neatly and the matching pieces must be far enough apart that the reader doesn’t see the pattern until the entire quilt is revealed at the end of the story.
Every writer, should exercise themselves with the discipline of a murder mystery to strengthen the plot muscles and develop characterisation fitness.
When the freedom of imagination is unleashed in the first draft it must be tempered with the discipline of plot structure in subsequent drafts. The best storytelling is controlled expression.
Transforming real life into a credible plot is more difficult than writing pure fiction. As Hitchcock said, you have to leave out the boring bits. You also have to make characters believable and events plausible with only the facts at your disposal. Real life often lacks the verisimilitude that fiction requires.
The art of suspense includes knowing what your protagonist is thinking but concealing it from the reader until it is evident in his actions. A twist ending must not only be a surprise. It must satisfy logic and be congruent with everything that has happened in the story.
Characterisation is getting to know the people in your stories. If you know your characters they will become believable to the reader.
Plotting is working out how to get to the end you have devised without letting the reader imagine it before they finish reading the book.
Writer’s Block is the novel in the word processor or the filing cabinet that you have never shown anyone. It probably needs more work but you wont know that until you get a second opinion.
Writer’s Block is not just being unable to write; it is doubting that what you write is any good; it is writing and deleting; it is wondering if your story is worth telling, or if you have a story at all.
There are two writing exercises I find valuable. The first is to write everything that comes into your head – the stream of consciousness technique. The second is the Zen Koan, reducing ideas and descriptions to the barest minimum.
All writers should keep journals. Writing without purpose, reflecting spontaneously without trying to shape the outcome is therapy for the working writer. It provides the mind with a holiday from serious writing.
Good writing is like meditating with a pen in your hand. The ideas flow directly from your subconscious to the paper. If you have good keyboard skills the process is the same with a computer.
Writing is the pursuit of experience that can be replicated in the mind. The relationship between that experience and reality is determined by the reader.
A script should always be read aloud. It is dialogue; it is designed to be heard. Some prose dialogue should also be read aloud to appreciate the nuances of the character’s speech.
Good writing transcends genre. It appeals to all readers.
The way characters react to each other is the test of their authenticity. A well-conceived character is like an actor playing a role. His believability depends on how he relates to other characters in ways that are consistent with his own personality.
Dialogue is the key to characterization. When the reader can hear the nuances of a character’s speech they get a direct impression of personality and attitude. They are in the presence of the character. It comes to life.
Writing is time filled with words.
Good dialogue has to resemble ordinary speech while subtly moving the story forward and simultaneously sounding like conversation with its own existential purpose.
Writing is a process of synthesis from experience to words. The writer translates what he sees, hears, tastes and feels into words. Reading is a process of synthesis from words to experience. The reader translates words into imagined experience.
A writer leaves a trail of words where his thoughts have gone. Some leave crumbs in the forest, some leave a thread of cotton, some leave post it notes on windows, others leave a vapour trail across the sky.
Pitching a manuscript is like describing your child to a stranger. You have to be objective but you also have to convey your love and pride without undue sentiment.
Writer’s block is like muscle cramp. If you massage and stretch immediately it won’t set in.
Writer’s block comes from the irrational fear of being unable to write. Let go of the fear and the writing will come.
Good writing is one step ahead of the writer’s mind.
Writing brings the unknown into the known. It defines the undefined and gives shape to the formless.
I write to fill the spaces in the outer limits of my mind where I would otherwise stare as if into the great unknown.
A blank mind can be a good starting point for writing. Language is like water; it flows into empty spaces. It will not necessarily be without form because it likes to flow where language has gone before. Like a fresh stream in a dry riverbed it will find its natural course.
The urge to write does not necessarily begin with having something to say. Writing is a process in which the writer is often the first reader of something he has not consciously created.
Writing for the theatre is like preparing for a committee meeting. A script is rarely completed inside the playwright’s head. He must hear the dialogue in the mouths of actors; see the way they bring the characters to life before the blueprint for performance can be finalized on the page. The writer is then in partnership with the director and the performers to face the final arbiter – the audience.
As a writer I reserve the right to observe humanity. I don’t have to justify my presence in terms of the social interactions going on around me. I try to be respectful and unobtrusive but I do not apologize for my position.
Writing every day is like leaving the tap dripping so there is always water in the pipe. If the tap is off too long it takes a while for the water to come through.
New ideas and creative expression are a synthesis of what is known, felt and imagined. Writers connect the real world to the imagined world with words that evoke feelings in the reader.
Thoughts appearing in the writer’s mind in response to experience use words to make sense of what is seen and felt. Thoughts arising without stimulus are a result of past experience that has already made sense.
There is a new piece technology I have just seen for the first time. It is a pen that captures and downloads handwriting. That is an amazing link between the way we first wrote and how we write now. For me it would short circuit the transition from journal notes to word processor. In the future there will no doubt be an even closer technological link between the thoughts of the writer and the printed page – perhaps even a form beyond the printed page.
What a writer will write about an experience immediately after it happens will differ from how he will write about it later. Transforming observations of reality into fiction requires reflection and synthesis with other ideas.
Two writers at the same location, observing the same scenes will write two different stories. What they bring to the experience determines what they will write.
Photography is a useful aid to writing. It assists the process of transforming images to words. A camera is like a notebook recording impressions. The instant nature of digital photography allows a smooth transition from observation to notebook. The key is for the writer to remain aware during the process rather than just mindlessly snapping shots.
When sensory impressions overload a writer all he can do is scribble notes and wait for down time when journal observations can be more fully explored.
The connection between everyday consciousness and the ideas that flow into writing are through the subconscious. A writer maintains that connection whether he is writing or not.
Knowing your characters is essential. When they become involved in a conversation, you just have to listen and they will write half your story.
Someday, when pen and paper are completely obsolete, writing may be called something else but the process will remain the same. Writing is the translation of ideas into a form that can be communicated.
A playwright does not have to create images for the reader’s mind like a novelist does. He has to create dialogue that the actor can enjoy speaking. A reader sees what the writer imagines. An actor feels it. The actor creates images for the audience.
A significant event in a writer’s life will begin translating itself into words almost as soon as it is experienced. Much time and effort are required to shape it into a narrative. Usually it will be combined with other events and ideas to make it a satisfying story.
Feature films are an extension of traditional oral storytelling when stories were passed from generation to generation. A good feature film can translate the essence of a good novel and the story continues to live.
It is quite a magical thing to find that words you wrote some time in the past have just allowed a reader in the present moment to enjoy what you once imagined.
The most basic kinds of writing are autobiographical journaling and spontaneous poetry. This is where writers discover their love of words. To develop from here to serious writing requires effort and persistence not all possess.
Time away from writing allows the pressure of ideas to build in the psyche and a return to writing opens the floodgates. For those who write every day, this works on a microcosmic level. If something prevents me from sitting at the keyboard for a few days I return to writing with a vengeance.
When you are writing a script you have to get out of the way and let your characters have conversations until it is time to create some drama. Then it is necessary to interfere in order to heighten the conflict.
A story is a taste of life.
Life is uncut fruit. Stories are the flesh within.
I tell stories about others in order to understand my own story.
If you tell a story to a writer it will become the writer’s story.
A single life contains many stories.
The story of my life will be told in my stories of others.
Two stories of one event will always differ.
Fiction has truth that real life cannot reveal.
Stories can rewrite histories.
Writer’s block is an eclipse of the imagination moon.
Writers dwell in a twilight zone between experience and imagination.
When something is not ready to be written it gestates in the subconscious until it is ready to inspire the writer.
There is possibly some mysterious, metaphysical connection between inspired writing and coffee.
Writers use words to unlock the reader’s imagination.
Writers are the travel agents and tour guides of the mind.
When life is not as exciting as it could be, a writer just invents another one.
A writer must be boringly disciplined before earning a licence to be creative.
Writing directly from impressions and observations is best done promptly and quickly before the fiction process takes over and turns them into a story.
Travel allows a writer to explore new description.
It is good to have a purpose to your writing but it is vital to have a purpose to your rewriting.
Write about life but keep living it at the same time.
Write for your Muse because without her you will have nothing to say.
Write for the Reader because you want to be read.
Write for yourself because the Reader is hypothetical.
Writing as we know it may one day cease to be practised but ideas will always flow from the minds of writers in some communicable form.
You may not have written anything since last year but you can start writing now and not miss a day of this one.
All writers should have same New Year resolution: write something every day.
Writing is the pursuit of ideas in the form of words.
Considering the population of the world is it asking much to have a best selling novel? It only takes the population of one small city.
When characters develop a relationship they can determine the plot.
The story of humanity is a multitude of lesser stories.
How many writers can aspire to having their stories remembered in two thousand years time?
Christmas exemplifies the power of storytelling.
Writers travel to the past and the future to discover the meaning of the present.
The past, present and future are a seamless continuum where the writer discovers ideas relevant to all three.
Good dialogue reveals the rhetorical answers in conversations.
Listening to rhythms and silences is the key to writing good dialogue.
Readers want the familiar described in unfamiliar ways.
Writing style comes from the narrative voice. In third person point of view it is rhetoric, in first person point of view it is character.
The reader sees with the eyes of the writer.
It is a year ago today since I began writing these daily reflections.
A character should be embedded in setting like a plant in soil, not just supported but nourished by it.
The aspiration to write fiction must be accompanied by dogged persistence and the ability to absorb frustration.
The name of a character should resonate with the personality.
Words are like piano keys beneath the fingers of a writer.
Fictional characters enable us to understand real people.
Reality is rarely plotted as well as a good story.
Biological metaphor for writing: a word is a molecule, a paragraph is a cell and a novel is a living organism.
Writing is a link between two minds, the writer and the reader.
Writing is a means for the over-imaginative to avoid insanity.
Sometimes past events write themselves as if they actually happened in words.
Writers are often disguised as normal people but there are usually tell tale signs such as a tendency to be excited by mere words.
The interesting thing about writing fiction is how often you encounter reality.
Writing fiction is like taking a walk in some enchanted forest full of strange encounters and surprising events.
Writing is not an obsession, it is a way of life.
Only inspiration can transform the craft of writing into the art of literature.
If you examined the qualifications of all the world’s best writers you would probably find nothing in common but the urge to write.
If you haven’t written in the dead of night with your heart on fire, you are not a writer.
If you were a writer and a golfer, now that would be an affliction.
Write for the line, not the page.
The second draft is a revelation of how imperfect the first draft was.
Writing it is not a religion but it requires faith. It is not a vocation but it requires commitment. It is not a profession but it is an occupation. It is not a sport but it is competitive. It is not a pastime but it passes time.
A writer not writing is a fish not swimming.
That feeling of being lost in a book is only available because the writer found a way out.
A writer staring at a blank page sees images appearing in his mind.
A deadline can open the chakra of inspiration or close it with fear.
Most people are too one-dimensional to be interesting characters in a novel. Writers have to combine people to create characters that will engage readers. That is why no one should get too excited if they recognize themselves in a novel written by a writer who knows them.
The opinions of characters are not necessarily those of their author.
I wonder if any of the great novels had not been published, how many editors would reject them now.
Metaphysically speaking, the Universal Unconscious is full of brilliant stories. How brilliant they are when they are written depends on the receptivity of the writer.
Somewhere in the centre of my head is a spring where words bubble out. Once I write them down a stream begins to flow. The source of the stream is a mystery to me.
One difference between good writing and ineffective writing is the interconnection of ideas, the seamless sense of their belonging together.
Writing emerges from the psyche. A writer has to trust the psyche to produce ideas, which can be converted into words. Writer’s Block is a lack of faith in the connection between conscious and subconscious when the conscious mind struggles in vain to create without the raw material of subconscious ideas.
When you hear a character talking in your head, don’t interrupt. Wait for another character to answer.
Anyone who has enjoyed reading a novel is a potential writer.
Write with passion, rewrite with intelligence.
Fictionalizing real people is a cunning art fraught with risk.
Inspiration is not an event it is a state of mind.
Writing is a process of transferring images from the mind of the writer to the mind of the reader.
A writer turns images into words. A reader turns words back into images.
Rejection by publishers is not as devastating to writers as characters refusing to speak to them.
You might win the argument but a Writer has valuable material that can be used later. Remember, any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental.
Sometimes inspiration passes through the room like a ghost. If you don’t start writing the idea is gone. I always carry pen and paper. A smart phone is probably just as useful for modern ghost hunting.
How well do you know your story? Try writing a second draft without looking at the first. If your finished manuscript were irretrievably lost, would you be able to rewrite your novel? Would it be the same novel? Is there a chance it could it be better?
Don’t judge a first draft until it is complete.
Imagine you are your character but never imagine your character is you.
Time to let the story go where it wants to go, formerly known as writer’s block.
The conversations of characters should be integral to the narrative.
Writing is a solitary activity that leads to social engagement.
A novel is a portal to a place where a writer has been.
There is a storyteller in every social group. They turn their experiences into entertainment.
Starting to write a new novel is like arriving as a tourist in an exotic, unfamiliar location.
We all experience reality but embellishment is what makes a story.
The people we listen to socially are not the conversationalists but the storytellers.
We understand others by seeing their lives as narratives.
Narratives have become essential to the human psyche because they are literal or metaphorical representations of our lives, our dreams and our fears.
When handwriting is completely subsumed by electronic processes, will writing still be called writing?
The last line of an unfinished manuscript is the first thing in a writer’s mind.
Most people in real life are not interesting enough to be characters in a novel otherwise they would end up in biographies.
A writer’s mind is an Aladdin’s cave guarded by the genie of imagination.
The Good have nothing to fear from a writer. Only the Bad and the Ugly would wish not to appear in a novel.
A novel is where a writer’s mind went.
A reader enjoying a novel is having a relationship with the writer.
A poem is an idea impersonating a random collection of words.
Love burns through the heart of a Poet leaving a trail of words.
A story is a trail of words leading to an emotional experience.
Good fiction is driven by truth.
The film adaptation of a novel is a good metaphor for what happens inside the reader’s mind when they read a story.
When writing in the first person point of view it is possible to connect with the character’s thoughts and allow the character to tell you who they are.
Life is what happens. Stories are what could have happened.
Realism is a seamless interaction between characters, setting and the real world.
Characters may arise from the writer’s observations of real people but once they are in a story they take on a life of their own.
Words were already powerful before they gained instant access to millions of electronic devices.
I wonder if Gutenberg ever imagined millions of books.
If that first caveman, scratching on a cave wall could see writing now.
Some things get into a writer’s head and just have to be written out.
If I didn’t have pen and paper or a keyboard I would be writing in my head.
It is narrative that gives meaning to life and fiction.
There is a special Muse who translates reality into fiction. She holds nothing sacred.
An effective plot should consist mostly of what your character does not want.
Writing narrative driven by character is like riding down a hillside without brakes.
If you recognize yourself in the fiction of a writer you know, don’t take it personally. You are only there to represent an idea the writer has about character. That is of course, unless you did something to really piss them off.
The difference between reflective journaling and autobiography is the element of narrative. A life must become a story to be of interest to others.
When all else fails, keep writing.
When in doubt, write.
The characters in a writer’s head must speak more clearly when the narrative is a script. The words will be delivered from the mouths of actors and they must sound real. They must make the actors feel like they are the characters.
Narrative without dialogue is like fish without chips.
Dialogue is narrative with the descriptive bits cut out.
Playwrights create dialogue and actors use it to tell stories.
A script is a blueprint for a group of collaborative storytellers.
Imagine rewriting your life as if it was just a draft manuscript.
I sometimes wonder if writing is simply following a trail of words to uncover a story that already exists.
A good review doesn’t praise, or flatter. It identifies exactly what the writer tried to achieve.
A good review is more rewarding to a writer than a royalty payment.
Fiction is the reality of a writer’s mind.
Verbs are the powerhouse of narrative and adjectives are the rudder.
Drab locations and boring people can be transformed by good prose.
When you need metaphors for your writing, pay attention to your dreams.
When you put strong characters in well constructed settings they begin to tell a story.
Foregrounding the setting in the exposition of a story is an effective way of embedding your characters in their own world and making their behavior authentic.
Inspiration has some direct entry point at the top of my head. I don’t know where it comes from or why.
Changing a character reaction can reroute an entire story.
An incongruous minor attribute of a character in the exposition of a story can become exponentially significant as the story unfolds. The longer you delay rewriting the more it is likely to require a major surgical operation. Inconsistencies in characterization should be diagnosed early.
Descriptive writing transforms images into words so that readers can transform them back again.
Thinking is to writing as the ocean is to a wave breaking on the shore.
Writing, like any creative act is an intensely personal process that ultimately becomes public.
In my journals, I reflect on my dreams, my thoughts and my life. I write them for myself. I have dozens of volumes and it is unlikely anyone else will ever read them.
Good writers avoid clichés. They aspire to write things that will become clichés.
Write fast, revise slowly and proof continuously.
Write on the crest of an imagination wave.
Imagine what you haven’t written.
Being a writer is the only way I can justify my schizoid state of mind.
With Writer’s Block you can no longer see the invisible.
Writing appears on the page like condensation on glass – it’s source, the mysterious, invisible vapours of the mind.
We write because thoughts desire to become immortal.
The story is in the detail and the telling.
Autobiographical writing is a process of recovering the things you didn’t know about your life.
The interaction between plot and character creates narrative tension.
When a character dictates plot, you know your characterization has been thorough.
If tapping out words on a keyboard to display on a screen and using a pen to put script on paper are both called writing then writing is not the physical action, it is the process of communicating ideas so others can see them.
In art, painterly brush strokes are like handprints revealing the creative touch of the artist. In literature, there are writerly phrases revealing the poetic thinking of the writer. James Joyce’s Ulysses is full of them.
Inspiration is a kick-start pedal, not an engine.
An artist uses line and tone to create an image. A writer uses word and phrase.
As a writer I can’t avoid being a critical reader. If I am finding fault with the writing of a novel after a hundred pages, I usually stop reading. A good novel is one in which I am hardly aware of the writing, except perhaps to marvel at its beauty.
The first reader to love your novel is the domino you are looking for.
If you love writing it is a vocation. If you have an instinct for marketing or the support of someone who does, it becomes a profession.
I write fiction to find truth.
Having multiple characters inside your head as you write is at least slightly schizoid.
In Writer’s Hell there is no writing.
In Writer’s Heaven there is an editor who knows exactly what a writer is trying to achieve and what the reading public want to read.
Writing is controlling the karma and the destiny of your characters.
Unlike real life, in a novel you can go back and tweak the events to create an entirely different outcome.
A small change in a character, or a relationship between two characters can become magnified to the point where they are no longer true to themselves. This can necessitate a major redraft in which the characters will rewrite the plot.
Sometimes I feel quite nasty when my plot requires a complication. It usually means having to think of some awful misfortune or catastrophe for my unsuspecting characters. The more perfectly I tailor the misfortune to the personality of the character the more Machiavellian I feel.
Write into the empty space of the line where words magically appear.
Writing exists in a void until it is read.
The best characters are a synthesis of persons known and imagined.
Setting must be visualized by the writer. The more clearly it is visualized the easier it is to describe its essential elements so it can be visualized by the reader.
Writing dialogue is a listening process – listening to conversations in your head.
A story is an agreement between the reader and the writer.
A manuscript is merely words and paper. A story is created by the reader from what the writer has written.
Being an imaginary autobiography, first person narrative requires a well-conceived character with a highly developed fictional history.
When phrases appear fully formed in your mind you know you are engaged with your subconscious, the source of all good writing.
The early writer gets the word.
Letters represent sounds, words represent ideas and sentences link ideas. The writer arranges these in complex patterns. The reader uses them to create meaning. It is actually quite a tenuous process.
A fish lives in water and swims. A writer dwells in words and writes.
Being a good writer may mean being inadequate in other fields of endeavour.
When crossing the dividing line between conventional syntax and an individual style, a writer must maintain communication with the reader.
There are times in the writing of a novel when you wonder: Is anyone else ever going to care about these characters?
The relationship between what is imagined and what is real in a novel cannot be quantified by mathematicians. It is a seamless blend.
A story is like a swimming pool. The reader swims from one end to the other. The swimmer is wet but the pool does not lose any water.
It is amazing how frequently truth emerges from fiction.
Writing is self-expression, thinking aloud, fantasizing, idea development, literary creation, prevention of madness or all of the above.
I sometimes wonder if the words I have written were prearranged somewhere in the ether.
The shortest poem and the longest novel both begin with a single word.
On a good writing day I get lost in words.
I remember carbon copy typos when there was no delete function.
Writing unlocks the thoughts of imaginary characters and lets them think they are real.
Writing is a journey into the realms of both the possible and the impossible.
What goes on in the mind of a reader should be of as much interest to a writer as a writer’s mind is of interest to a reader.
A book opens a window for the reader. A review opens another window for the writer. Hopefully they offer the same view.
Twenty-six letters carry all the ideas ever expressed in the English language.
Words are the pieces of an unlimited number of jigsaw puzzle pictures.
Language is a tool for the expression of thought. Writing is a device for the recording of ideas.
Punctuation is secondary to syntax. Good writing directs the reader with its rhythm.
Post-modernity and digital media have freed writers to manipulate written language to suit their style and purpose.
It was a deliberate style choice to leave out quotation marks for Ian’s Story. I like the poetic effect – I learned it from writers like James Joyce and Tim Winton. As a reader I find it makes the narrative flow through the mind.
A short story is a cup of tea and a chat with a writer.
A novel is a journey in the footsteps of a writer.
A novel is a complex metaphor – a story representing life.
Write like a mercenary hunting the enemy.
Write like a detective seeking the facts.
Write fearlessly, like a warrior.
Write like a child seeking the heart of a butterfly.
Write like an artist painting in the finest detail on the largest possible canvas.
When characters arrive in a story they should be noticed like actors walking on stage.
Remove everything but dialogue from a novel and read it like a script to see how much of the story your characters are telling.
Story is a Venn intersection of character and plot.
See your characters as other characters see them.
A writer’s relationship with characters is similar to that of a director and actors. Like a director, a writer is an audience of one who sees the performance objectively and shapes it for dramatic purpose.
There are some very good stories locked inside coffee beans.
Characterization is the art of balancing motivation, behaviour and consequences to complement plot.
Characters are the companions of a writer’s solitude
When I write a story I feel I owe it to my characters to find readers for them.
A good story relies on the power of words. It should not need the audio-visual enhancement now available in ebooks.
Words are kaleidoscope pieces fitted together to create images.
Characters, unlike people are designed to live forever. Creating someone who is going to live longer than you requires thought.
Good characters misbehave.
The ability of the brain to construct meaning makes proof reading a never-ending task. You have to spot typos when your brain isn’t watching.
Good writers let their characters make bad decisions.
The first line of a novel should bite the tongue like sherbet.
As a writer I can only guess how readers will respond to my words. It is very gratifying when they get the meaning I intended.
Words are like Trojan horses of meaning. They travel from the imagination of the writer to the imagination of the reader.
If the imaginary world is engaging, the reader should see characters the way other characters see them.
If a picture is worth a thousand words a book cover must be worth a thousand novels.
Reader, welcome to the three-ringed circus of my mind.
Have idea. Will write.
Stories allow readers to recognize the unfamiliar.
Problems make characters.
A reader should initially find your protagonist familiar but then discover they are not what they seemed.
A writer must care more about his story than his characters.
Don’t let your characters get what they want.
When you get to like a character it is difficult to let him mess up his life. If you don’t, he will remain one dimensional and boring to the reader.
A character driven story is likely to have a psychologically satisfying plot.
Inside the mind of a well-conceived character there is a story waiting to be told.
Your cover is a metaphor for your novel.
The writer is the voice, marketing is the megaphone.
If you want your writing to have integrity you must keep the writing process completely separate from the marketing.
Writing must be an end in itself because marketing is where you begin to sell your soul to the devil.
Your final draft should cut and polish.
Your second draft should slash and burn.
Your first draft should take no prisoners.
I rarely think of style. I just write the story the way it wants to be written.
Your writing style is your voice. It will vary if you have something different to say.
Conventional publishing is just a filter. The principles are the same for self publishing. Readers determine the success of writing.
A novel is one small planet in the galaxy of a writer’s mind.
The link between writing and thinking is sometimes tenuous.
Writing is also reading something for the first time.
I hear words in the silence of my mind.
If you can’t write well, don’t take writing lessons. Reading will show you technique. Life experience will give your writing substance.
Writing is a monster, devouring imagination one line at a time.
Writer’s block is …
A writer must learn to combine the unexpected with a logical outcome.
The way a character changes as a result of experience is the greatest challenge for the writer.
Character profiles and histories in your backstory help you to keep your characters consistent with their past. They should only change in accordance with their nature.
In my writing space, at my computer, I like to be surrounded by books, pencils, pens, paper, photographs, posters, sculpture, prints, paintings, notebooks, cd’s, dvd’s, shells, rocks, feathers, beer bottles, wine bottles, postcards, magazines, Buddha statues, prayer flags, beer glasses, wine glasses, incense burners, coffee mugs, and Ideas.
The writing of fiction began with the invention of the adjective.
When you allow a character to tell their story you have a partner in the writing process.
Sometimes a story has to find its own way.
In order to be a successful writer you need to be an astute observer of the human condition, have a way with words and be oblivious to rejection.
There is no cure for writing.
Writing is a cure for a rampant imagination.
Imagining who might buy your book starts with asking why you would buy it yourself.
Designing a book cover is an exercise in deciding what your book is really about and who might buy it.
Words are just collections of symbols for sounds that trigger responses in the brain. How amazing is it that they can tell a story?
Words have an amazing power to take the reader into the world of imagination. A writer is privileged to wield that power.
Character voice is the most important part of my story writing. When I hear my characters speak I can clearly visualize them. When I hear their conversations I see the setting as well. For me, writing is like sitting in the cinema with your eyes closed then slowly opening them.
I get to know my characters by what they do. I want my readers to do likewise. A physical description of a character sometimes gets in the way of the reader visualizing the person for themselves. An approximate orientation with age, gender and physique can be built upon with descriptions of actions, reactions and emotions. If a reader first sees the character doing and feeling, they will carry that impression as the story unfolds and the character will be real to them. Ideally, I expect my reader to replicate the process that I use as a writer.
As a writer you must care about your characters enough to make them suffer. If you don’t they will remain insignificant and so will your story.
Living without conflict is comfortable. If you allow your characters to become comfortable, your story becomes a chronicle of the uninteresting. When you write you should seek conflict at every turn.
There have been a lot of books written about the creative process. Where does inspiration come from? I am often surprised by what I write. I can recognize ideas that originate in my memory, my experience, my learning, my imagination and my thinking process but the way a story unfolds is beyond my control. It seems to flow from some hidden source. Things I know from experience are blended with things I know secondhand to create a reality that lives only in my imagination. My characters often begin with people I know but usually evolve very quickly into people I have never met. Scenarios from my life, morph into stories that have a life of their own. When I redraft and rewrite it always seems like someone else’s story, not my own. Publishing the finished product is an act of faith because I am not sure what my stories actually represent. They have demanded to be written and I believe in them like second cousins. They are blood relative to me but not of my flesh. The range of genres I have written – from conventional fiction and satire to science fiction and fantasy suggests to me that I have been looking through windows into several other minds. I am never sure what I will see next.
Allow your characters to explore their own world.
The last line of a novel must leave the reader satisfied but wanting more.
The first line of a novel must intrigue the reader with possibility.
The name of a character is integral to the character’s persona.
Finding names for characters is part of the process of discovering their personalities.
Know your character’s flaws as well as their strengths.
Know what your characters want and what is preventing them from achieving it.
Dialogue, even in flawed characters must have purpose – it should move the story forward.
Draw detailed plans of the houses your characters live in. Draw maps of the places they frequent.
Read lots of first lines in good novels.
Want to be really radical? Destroy the original draft and then rewrite it.
Try a Radical Draft: rewrite a story completely with out referring to the original manuscript.
Writer’s Block is just, not knowing where to look next. It can become a state of mind. Take a risk. Introduce a new character or make something disastrous happen. It takes movement to free a blockage.
Setting + Character + Conflict = Story
It is sometimes that simple.
The moment a writer lets go of a character, the story begins to unfold.
It is motivation more than detail that makes a strong character.
If I am criticized for the views of my characters, I don’t defend myself. I am not my characters.
Characters speak for themselves. They should not be mouthpieces for the writer’s own views.
Conversations between characters can be very elucidating for the writer.
Script dialogue must be heard before it is written.
When I am not sure what to do with a character I focus on the setting, where the character is. A character will always find something to do there. Once characters do something, they develop.
Listening is the key to writing good dialogue. It’s not the words, it’s the rhythm.
Writing is like oil painting. With the pigments of memory and knowledge and the brush of imagination, an artist creates a picture that is both familiar to the senses and new to the eye.
At the bottom of a manuscript in progress, I keep a list of dot points that I add to and delete as I write. It allows me to go off on tangents then come back to the story. Sometimes the story devours the dot points and sometimes it leaves them there, never to be used.
The writer must live imaginatively in his setting to make it real for his characters.
Exposition is the art of sketching in the minimum required detail.
Characterization is like being Mister Squiggle. A few lines are gradually developed into a three-dimensional drawing.
Plotting is discovering the inner potential of your characters.
The more backstory the writer leaves in his mind, the less for the editor to discard.
Starting to write a new novel is like going to a movie. You have an idea that interests or excites you and it begins to unfold on the big screen of your imagination.
Only a Reader can judge a Writer.
It is like the tree that no one hears falling in the forest. The real reward for a writer is feedback from the reader.
Visualizing a setting is essential to allow your characters to behave realistically. The writer must see the chairs and the doorways and the dirt on the floor. He must be able to describe it great detail but only reveal what is essential to the reader. With my early short stories and first two novels I drew detailed diagrams of my settings. In time you learn to construct settings in your mind.
When do I choose first person point of view? When I hear the character’s voice in my head telling me the story.
Where the mind goes, the pen will follow.
Writing is where thoughts melt onto paper.
Fiction is a blend of the writer’s experience, research and imagination. It is none of the reader’s business, which is which.
Writing is easy. Editing is hard. Marketing is the real challenge.
I could die happy if I’d written ‘On The Road’, ‘Midnight’s Children’ or ‘The Lord of the Rings’. Since they are taken I hope there is a masterpiece still percolating in my unconscious.
Why publish on Kindle? It doesn’t reject you.
Submit relentlessly to traditional publishers and agents because the feedback you get will be invaluable. Rejection doesn’t necessarily mean your work is no good. You don’t get a lot of useful feedback through self-publishing. Don’t do it until you are sure your work is good enough and significant other people agree with you. Once you begin publishing on kindle, be meticulous with your formatting and proofing.
I write religiously every morning for at least and hour and I write impulsively in stolen moments and spaces as often as I can.
I started writing poetry when I was about twelve years old. I have never been anywhere without a pen and notebook since. I realised at an early age that I was addicted to writing. It is part of my process of finding meaning. As well as fiction I do a lot of reflective journal writing. The most significant point for me was about ten years ago when I resolved to spend a minimum of one hour writing every morning before breakfast. That was when seven unfinished novels and a script came to fruition in about three years.
My main character usually starts as a kind of alter ego of myself. As the story unfolds I allow him to grow through his experiences to become a person in his own right. He only emerges fully once I take him beyond the limits of my own experience. My minor characters are sometimes based on people I know but they develop according to the needs of the main character and the plot. They always develop attributes, which differentiate them from the original person. More often my minor characters spring directly from the plot and seem to arrive fully formed. I meet them and welcome them into my story.
Dig out all the pieces you have written over the years and stored away. Read them again. Some of them, you will keep as a record of your journey, many you will discard and there may be a few that can be developed into something better. Most of us don’t have anything brilliant that we haven’t used.
Publishers rarely have your interests at heart. Their bottom line is their own profit margin. I have been fortunate to receive quite a lot of feedback from editors with many of my rejections. You don’t always get this but when you do it is invaluable. The worst thing publishers can do is to keep you on hold with false expectations. I have held manuscripts for a long as eighteen months, engaged in redrafting consultation, before ultimately being rejected. Don’t save yourself for anyone – until the contract is signed. Even then, consider the sequel yours until it is paid for. Some of the big publishers haven’t yet worked out how to handle the e-book revolution. I don’t submit to anyone who expects a writer to sign over all electronic rights in return for a hard copy publication.
In my early years of writing I wrote everything by hand. Once I discovered the word processor I typed from my hand written drafts. The process of proofing, editing and rewriting on the word processor gradually drew me into writing direct to the computer. I would often print out drafts to work on by hand but now I rarely print until I am ready to submit and I write direct to the computer ninety percent of the time.
In my study, I surround myself with books, magazines, pictures, stones, leaves, seashells, seeds, memorabilia, empty beer bottles and piles of paper. I feel at home here and write productively but I can never find anything.
I write every morning before breakfast. On week days, that means getting up at five am. I write at any other opportunity I am given. I have only vague ideas about deadlines and rarely meet them. I often switch projects and that delays completion. When I come back to something after a break I usually make better progress.
I am a writer of many voices. If there is a perfect voice out there, somewhere … I still haven’t found what I’m looking for.
I am a compulsive writer. Journal writing is the most therapeutic form of writing but I suspect fiction does fulfil a healing function.
I write for the most intelligent and sensitive readers in the universe.
You have to be fascinated by your own characters. If you aren’t, no one else will be. They must be multi-dimensional and have a history, which is not necessarily told but informs the character’s motivation. My characters arrive visually, usually saying or doing something that shows me who they are.
I rarely, consciously select a point of view. Point of view is part of the story when it arises in my mind. I write the story the way it comes to me. Sometimes I write in multiple points of view.
The basic ingredients of a story are an intriguing exposition, engaging characters and something to make the reader care about what happens next.
I like poetic writing with strong visual imagery. The writers I admire are the ones that engage me as a reader. My first inspiration to write was the poetry of Dylan Thomas. JRR Tolkein, TH White, Salman Rushdie, Peter Carey, AS Byatt, Jack Kerouac, Douglas Adams, Terry Pratchett, Richard Adams, Arundhati Roy and William Horwood have all inspired me at different times.
I never go anywhere without a notebook and pen. I jot down ideas continuously. For many years I only sat down to write when I was inspired. Now, I write at the same time every day – an hour before breakfast. The routine stimulates my productivity. It’s like turning on a tap. Whenever I find extra time or stolen minutes, I can usually be just as prolific.
I began writing poetry about things that happened to me when I was in Primary School. From about the age of twelve, my teachers began to take an interest in my writing.
Writing begins with a love of reading. My love of reading began with Enid Blyton’s ‘Famous Five’ and ‘Secret Seven’. I went on to Phantom comics and the Illustrated Classics. My father joined a book club when I was about twelve and I began to devour the children’s titles then read the ‘Senior Fiction’ he bought for himself.
There is a saying that everyone has a book in them. But do they have the perseverance to proof, publish and market it?
Writing is alchemy.
Your writing is a reflection of your state of mind.
Your state of mind determines the quality of your writing.
Writing is the graffiti of imagination.
Writing is the hieroglyphics of thinking.
Write and the world reads with you. Read and you’re on your own.
Write and the world reads with you.
Writing is quality time with yourself.
Behind actors, politicians, teachers, TV anchors, comperes, comedians and advertisers there are writers.
In my next life I am going to be a marketing guru. In the life after that I will be return to being a writer.
There was a time when writers only had to be concerned with writing. Now they have to be concerned with marketing.
Writing is a tangible form of visualization.
Writers make words conform to ideas.
Writing is the art of translating thoughts into grammar.
Write and the universe writes with you.
Write now. Edit later.
Writing involves a lot of tunnel vision.
People who think they recognize themselves in novels by writers they know must realize that writers use everything as grist to the mill of their fiction. Don’t be flattered or offended. Fiction has a reality of its own to which writers are beholden.
Characters may tell their own stories but they don’t do plot structure very well.
Stories often write themselves but they don’t proof themselves or write improved drafts. The writer has to do that.
The writing process is often purely intuitive and can be described only in vague terms – for example the naming of a character. I chose Mark Brooker for the main character in Landscape simply from the fact that I wanted something sounding ordinary but slightly literary.
Self-publishing gives you a sense of control over your work but this comes at a price. The price is self-promotion. Marketing is a complex and time-consuming process. I have been on a steep learning curve for over a year and I discover some thing new every week.
Proofreading is an art. It is essential to have others proof read your manuscripts. I pick up typos in manuscripts that are in fifth draft. The brain reads for meaning. The eyes scan and the brain makes assumptions. It is not natural to read one word at a time. You read what you think you read.
After collecting enough rejection letters to wallpaper a house, I decided to begin publishing my work on the internet. I am progressively uploading my work to amazon and smashwords.
The Artist Vincent Van Gogh had a maxim: Not a day without a line. I believe this applies to anyone who aspires to be a writer.In the space of five years I went from having about a dozen unfinished novels to five completed manuscripts. I did this by setting aside one hour every day, 364 days a year (I took a break on Christmas Day) when I knew I could write uninterrupted. The time for me was 5.30 am. I set the alarm for 4.50 am so I could get up, meditate for a little while, make a coffee and get writing. When the brain becomes attuned to engaging in a particular way at a particular time, the result is continuity, the antidote to Writer’s Block. If you write at the same time each day you can pick up the thread of your narrative almost instantly. In a very short time you can develop the habit of writing effectively for every minute you are at your desk.
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sample from Landscape http://www.amazon.com/dp/B004OR1UEU
He follows the boys out of the main street. They seem to be heading roughly in the direction of Durbar Square. He doesn’t recognise any of the streets or the turns and he soon realises he will need the boys to guide him back.
They come to a nondescript house in a poorly lit street. There is a small, green light bulb over the doorway. A large man, wearing a singlet and trousers despite the cool night air, beckons him through the doorway. Mark turns to the boys and hands them money.
‘Wait for me,’ he tells them. ‘I’ll give you double.’
At the end of a short hallway, he pushes apart a false curtain of plastic beads. A stern and brawny man nods to him to indicate an open doorway. Mark steps into the room. A pink lampshade illuminates a bed, covered with a horrible lilac bedspread. After a few minutes an obese woman in a green sari, looking more Indian than Nepalese, appears in the doorway.
‘Hello Honey. How are you?’
‘… Good thanks.’ She is not what he hoped for.
‘What is your good name?’
‘Welcome Mark. I am Neera. You like nice girl Mark? Young? Pretty? Very nice for you.’
‘Yes.’ He knows his relief must be obvious.
‘Good. Can we do business first? I have lovely young girl for five hundred. One hour. Very nice.’
‘… Can I see her first?’
The woman hesitates before agreeing. She goes out. Mark opens the money pouch behind his belt. He takes out the five hundred and slips it into a pocket.
The woman returns. A girl follows her into the room. That is what she is. A girl. She is wearing a white silk dress. The woman takes her by the shoulders and moves her in front of Mark. The girl stares at the floor. The woman puts her big, pudgy hand under the girl’s chin and tilts her face up toward Mark.
‘This is Lilly,’ says the woman. The girl’s face is pretty but it has been made grotesque with cheap make up. Her lips are shiny crimson and her eyes are temptress dark. She is no more than thirteen years old. He looks down at the small buds of her breasts and feels a sickly rush of lust for the small creature he is offered.
The girl looks up at Mark and smiles as if prompted. Her smile is tutored for seduction. It breaks the lower half of her face like a leer. In her eyes, Mark sees fear, defiance and resignation – a blend of innocence and worldliness. It makes him nauseous. He stammers.
‘No … Look I’m sorry … This is not what I wanted…’ He meets the girl’s eyes again. ‘I’m really sorry.’ Now her face shows only fear.
He steps around the woman and moves toward the doorway. The woman makes a noise that may be a word or just an exhalation of outrage. As Mark parts the bead curtain, the brawny man moves to block his way. Mark doesn’t hesitate. He bolts toward the door.
As he reaches the street, he sees the two boys sprinting around the corner. He follows them at a run. The next street is empty. Mark runs on to another corner. There is no sign of his two guides. He hurries along the dimly lit street, hoping his sense of direction will get him quickly back to Thamel. He tries to listen as he walks, to catch the sound of the boys ahead but they seem to be out of hearing now. Perhaps they will be waiting for him a little further on.
The glare of a single light obscures his vision as he reaches a street with tradesmen premises. He recognises a cycle repair shop. Out of the glare a dark figure emerges. It is standing in the middle of the narrow road. Mark instinctively looks for a side street to make a detour. As he does, he catches a glimpse of another figure approaching from behind. Blackness erupts in his head.
sample from Ian’s Story http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052DNENU
When the police came to the door, my first thought was that Ian had violated the terms of his parole. He had been away two and a half weeks. Though I knew he had been given permission for his gem trip, I thought perhaps there had been some mix up, or, he was late reporting back. I was sure it could be explained and sorted.
When the officer had confirmed who I was, he simply said:
- Your husband has been found in his vehicle.
His heart, was my next thought. His damaged heart. For a moment I thought of his prison beating, the way he had once described it to me: the brutal punches to his chest. I imagined the pain he must have felt when his injured heart stopped. I saw him in the wilderness, alone with the sudden agony, the terrible realisation that his life was going to end.
I heard the policeman’s next words as if from a great distance. I wasn’t sure he was talking to me.
- There was a hose fitted to the exhaust pipe of the vehicle. We are treating the death as suicide. We have referred the matter to the coroner. You’ll have to contact him regarding arrangements for the body.
Suicide is the cruellest death for those who are left behind. It leaves so many unanswerable questions. It seems to rupture the spirit connection, taking not only a life but a soul. There is no faith that I am aware of, which can offer assurance for those who take their own lives.
14 Jun 2011 https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B004OR1UEU
By Lottie Chase – This review is from: Landscape (Kindle Edition) 4.0 out of 5 stars Refreshing fiction,
Landscape breathes fresh air into the sometimes murky realms of travel fiction. Not only does it appeal to the inner globe-trotter but it also seeks to unearth the connections between body and mind, sex and love. Stephen Faulds expertly narrates this life-affirming novel as the ever-challenging protagonist Mark Brooker seeks to consolidate his midlife crisis with a spiritual quest that knows no boundaries.
From the depths of Australia to the peaks of the Annapurna Circuit, Faulds leads you on a trek like no other as you are guided through beautiful landscapes and tragic encounters.
A highly recommended read for anyone seeking to explore the raw truths of humanity and the fine lines that separate desire and love.
Ian’s Story – a review
I finished reading Ian’s Story almost two weeks ago now and resisted the urge to review it straight away – not because I did not enjoy it but because I wanted to do it justice.
Quite frankly, my initial reaction to Ian’s Story was a sort of stunned ‘oh my god’. It really is that good. Not until later did my brain kick in to tell mewhy it was so good. Not since reading Crime and Punishment have I read a psychological novel that delved so deeply into the psyche of a flawed man or made me feel so much compassion for a fictional character.
Ian is flawed and he does end up making an awful mistake, one that teeters on the edge of legal paedophilia, yet in exploring how and why he got to that point, Stephen Faulds makes it possible for us to forgive Ian even though he cannot seem to forgive himself.
Do no make the mistake of thinking that this novel is a justification or apology for paedophilia – it’s not. Just as Crime and Punishment is not a justification for murder, Ian’s Story is not a justification – its a journey, a journey that explores the crime, the punishment and the salvation that can result from such a descent into hell.
Following Ian on this journey is not a casual read. You will not dip into this book on a rainy weekend when you have nothing better to do. It will grab you and it will not let you go until the very last page because, for all his flaws, Ian’s life will resonate with anyone who has ever searched for meaning in life, anyone who has ever been trapped by duty and the desire to ‘do the right thing’, anyone who has ever been lonely or fallen in love with an unattainable mirage. In short, anyone with a heartbeat and human DNA.
On the technical side I might argue with Stephen Faulds about how he structured the story yet when I sat down and thought about how I would have restructured it [were I an editor] I found that I could not really think of a ‘better’ way of doing it. So I have to say that the structure is a little quirky but will make sense at the end. I should add that this quirkiness does not detract from the story or my enjoyment of it.
I cannot fault Stephen Faulds in the area of prose either. His words flowed effortlessly from start to finish with no jarring ‘what the…?’ moments. To be honest I stopped being aware of the ‘prose’ after the first few paragraphs because it did what all good prose should do – it drew me in and carried me along without drawing attention to itself. I did not read about Ian, I saw him, I saw his poor troubled wife, I saw the emotionally impoverished life they lead. Only when I put the book down for the last time did I become aware of how beautiful the words had been.
There is nothing indie about Ian’s Story. It is the work of a mature writer who knows what he’s doing and does it extraordinarily well. More importantly, Ian’s Story has a depth that will appeal to anyone interested in what makes us all human.
Very highly recommended.
Had talks with Partho Chakrabarty from The Second Foundation Theatre Co who is interested in my Krishnamurti play. He also asked me to write a him a monologue.
Chennai 8th March
Visited the Krishnamurti Foundation – the gardens where I heard Krishnamurti talk in 1984. Found some dvd’s of the talks I attended. They will be invaluable in writing my Krishnamurti play.
Great article on writing a synopsis. . http://www.bloggingauthors.com/blogging_authors/2011/2/17/writing-yourself-out-of-that-synopsis-hole.html
Landscape and Ian’s Story now available in all formats from the premium catalogue.
Children’s Story The Stone Frog now in the premium catalogue at smashwords.
My novel Landscape is now available at Amazon.com for $2.99